Wow. Can't believe I missed this...
Yukub, I'm no artist, but I wouldn't mind chatting with you about the story itself. I've done quite a bit of Star Wars RPing [writing stories and such since 2005], and in quite a few of my RPs/fics I take real world people, places, and events and "Star Wars'ize" them. Greek Hoplites, Scottish Wars of Independence, Medieval Knights, Roman Legionnaires, etc etc...